April 27th, 2016 at 01:08am
Hello, hello!
First off, I gotta say that I love your summary. The rhyming made it upbeat and I felt like I was actually in a Wonderland-esque story.
Is it weird that I can perfectly see Brendon as the Mad Hatter? Every since the I Write Sins Not Tragedies music video, the depiction just fits. Your use of imagery is amazing and I can perfectly see everything like a movie. You didn't put much detail into making the connections between Hatter and Brendon but somehow everything still seemed to fit together. It just worked and I can't really explain why. Also, everything the Hatter says in the first two chapters is amazing. I like Cyra already and I can't help but wonder what happened to her.
Can't wait to read more!
Gah, I'm loving this more and more as I read it. I want to know so much. And uggggghhhhh back off, Cyra, Hatter is mine! But she seems pretty epic herself.
You have an intriguing writing style here =) I hope you update soon! <3