Mad as Rabbits - Comments

  • lost em.

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    The Mad Hatter has always been a love of mine since I first read the book In Love I love Wonderland so much, so this looks and sounds so epic! I love the little poem in the beginning!

    Gah, I'm loving this more and more as I read it. I want to know so much. And uggggghhhhh back off, Cyra, Hatter is mine! lmfao But she seems pretty epic herself.

    You have an intriguing writing style here =) I hope you update soon! <3
    April 27th, 2016 at 01:08am
  • Dom.

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    Hello, hello!

    First off, I gotta say that I love your summary. The rhyming made it upbeat and I felt like I was actually in a Wonderland-esque story.

    Is it weird that I can perfectly see Brendon as the Mad Hatter? Every since the I Write Sins Not Tragedies music video, the depiction just fits. Your use of imagery is amazing and I can perfectly see everything like a movie. You didn't put much detail into making the connections between Hatter and Brendon but somehow everything still seemed to fit together. It just worked and I can't really explain why. Also, everything the Hatter says in the first two chapters is amazing. I like Cyra already and I can't help but wonder what happened to her.

    Can't wait to read more!
    April 25th, 2016 at 04:02am
  • paralumana

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    Can I just take a moment to appreciate the irony of the title? “Mad as Rabbits”, yet it’s the rabbit who seems to be the only sane being in the story haha. I also like your way of depicting the Red Queen, she’s not as impulsively and irrationally violent as other Wonderland versions. She only explodes when provoked, and she explodes with good reason. And, oh man, is there romance in this? I like that twist, especially with Brendon Urie playing the Mad Hatter. I’m also intrigued by the idea of having two universes, which deviates a little from the original Lewis Caroll version. The description is simple and straight to the point, and the way the plot is revealed is very bold. Nice job Smile
    April 25th, 2016 at 03:16am
  • MousyCh

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    I'm not sure what I was expecting when I saw Brendon's face but I'm definitely expecting a lot now. I find the idea wonderful and I really like how the plot unfolds and this Mad Hatter Brendon (the image is stuck in my head and I enjoy it quite a lot) and I don't know but while reading these few chapters I couldn't help but think of The Ballad of Mona Lisa for some reason, playing in the background.

    Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next and how the two will interact and how he will introduce Cyra to Wonderland and her past. I really can't wait for the next chapter!
    April 16th, 2016 at 01:05pm
  • Chairman Meow

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    OH WOW! THIS IS AMAZING!!

    I've always been interested in Mad Hatter ever since Johnny Depp played the role. But Brendon Urie as the Hatter? I never would've thought of that! This is amazing and I love Cyra already. I wonder what happened to her to have all those burned scars and all. I'm definitely gonna subscribe to this so I can read more. Your depiction of everything is flawless. I love how you started out with that scene with the Red Queen. I always think that the Red Queen is a highly misunderstood character, but that's probably just me over-analyzing everything as always.

    All in all, however, I do think that you had done a very good job with this story so far. It's definitely different that what I've read in other stories so far and you've taken my favorite fairy tale into a whole new level. Kudos to you!
    April 16th, 2016 at 05:27am
  • Bangarang!

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    Okay so i haven't started this yet but the title and icon caught my attention... and oh my gosh your blurb thing is amazing i am so damn intrigued going to start it now!
    April 12th, 2016 at 11:36am
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Amazing! I love how you combined the two realities. I'm really facinated by your writing style, actually haha, it really draws me in and it feels like I'm reading a book. I'm super stoked to read more, awesome work!
    March 30th, 2016 at 05:57am
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    You have some of the best stories ever, I swear. Mr. Green I saw it was a Brendon Urie fic, which not only made it awesome, but the fact that it involves Alice in Wonderland into the mix throws it into a whole other realm of awesomeness. I really like the intro! Can't wait to read more!
    March 30th, 2016 at 03:33am