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  • SweetlyBroken

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    @ Writerx11x
    I can make it more obvious about who is speaking. :)
    April 6th, 2016 at 12:29am
  • Writerx11x

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    Really a cliffhanger until tomorrow? And as for confusing it evened itself out and maybe I'm a bit dim sometimes. However sometimes it's hard to follow who is the one "speaking" in the chapter I know you are doing every other but sometimes I forget who was last...
    April 6th, 2016 at 12:27am
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    @ Writerx11x
    I saw and fixed it. Which part is hard to follow?
    April 2nd, 2016 at 07:18pm
  • Writerx11x

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    So far I like the story. It's a bit confusing to follow though. And you have the last chapter posted twice
    April 2nd, 2016 at 07:15pm
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