Always Want to Feel This Way - Comments

  • KeepCallin'MeHome

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    I'm already in over my head! I love this! I really like how vague it is, but you still have enough to connect to the characters. It is such a cliché, but it's so well written and interesting that you don't even notice. It's not your typical story. I absolutely love times a million how you're using the car crash throughout the story. I love stories like that, where you know it's not a good idea and you know you'll only get hurt, but you can't manage to stop. I can't wait for more!
    August 20th, 2016 at 02:33pm
  • call of the wild

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    Can't wait for an update! I'll casually be over here rereading this over and over until one comes.
    June 10th, 2016 at 06:54pm
  • call of the wild

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    Yayyyyy! An update! Liza and Sam, eh? It's starting to get really fun and I can't wait to see where this goes. Hoping the next update comes quick!
    May 19th, 2016 at 11:32pm
  • call of the wild

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    Just re-read the entire thing while waiting for an update. Hope you're doing well and just busy and not sick or anything like that!
    May 17th, 2016 at 12:46am
  • Michael Westen

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    I don't think I even noticed we don't know their names. I loved the chapter and I can't wait for another one. I'm very excited for the party!
    April 28th, 2016 at 06:30pm
  • call of the wild

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    I kind of like the mystery of not knowing their names, but I'm also a huge name nerd and it's killing me not knowing. So I'm torn! I imagine him having some preppy name and her a cute, elegant one with a little bit of spunk, but what do I know? Hahaha! But I love this update and how you're leading us in to them getting to know each other slowly. I just love this story so much and can't wait for the next update!
    April 27th, 2016 at 03:57am
  • Michael Westen

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    So so so good. I love how the car crash thing is still tied in, specifically at the end of the chapter. You continue to blow me away. I can't wait for the next few chapters/the rest of the story!

    Thanks for the shout out Wink
    April 19th, 2016 at 05:03am
  • call of the wild

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    I'm loving this story so much so far! It's so different to read a story in second person, but it works so well here. Curious as to if we'll ever learn their names or if that will be a nice little mystery. Update soon!
    April 19th, 2016 at 02:43am
  • Michael Westen

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    Summary/Layout: Overall amazing. The colors are perfect. The summary layout makes me smile. I just love how the lyrics are set to the right and the actual summary itself is towards the left. Speaking of the summary itself I just love "But it's our cliche."

    Chapter 1: I just love this as the introduction. I'm already falling in love with this. This line specifically I find wonderful. "Our lives should have been running parallel, never meant to cross."

    Chapter 2: It's official I love this. I love the narrative and first impression that she has of him. I also love the casual mention of the fact she used to collect uni t-shirts. It's a cool little quirk I don't think I've really seen in a character before.

    Chapter 3: The chunk of text that is the dialogue is genius. The fact that she hasn't worn the shirt from the college she's going to speaks volumes.

    I can't wait to see where this goes! Update soon because this is a new addiction.
    April 18th, 2016 at 02:07am
  • dawn of light

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    I definitely love this flow you got going on for your chapters. It's sweet and straight to the point. I love that it's all short, as well~ it's more empowering in a way tehe

    Her mindset isn't too much, you know? So I love that! It's realistic and pretty much similar to the way I think (like the way she views thing hahah). Great job!
    April 13th, 2016 at 09:06pm
  • Audrey T

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    Love the summary. Thought it was really nicely written; almost poetic.

    The second chapter did a really great job of setting up the story. I loved that it was short and sweet, but it still gave a lot of information. I thought it was great that you pulled the chapter together by having that connection between the first and last sentences.

    I think you did a great job of describing the guy from the narrator's point of view (rather than subjectively). I think we learn a lot about both the guy and the narrator just from how she describes him and the things she notices about him. Her being so critical of him, as a person living in a town that becomes a tourist hotspot, seemed very realistic to me. You can feel all the bitterness she has for his type.

    I also thought it was really nice how he brings back this bit of nostalgia for her, even if it's not necessarily a pleasant memory. I feel like that might be some foreshadowing for their relationship in the future.

    Overall, I like this story so far. I'm definitely subscribing and I can't wait for the next chapter.
    April 10th, 2016 at 11:48pm
  • sore thumb;

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    @ Mogar
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    awwwww thank you so much for commenting! I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
    April 7th, 2016 at 06:17pm
  • Naesheim

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    This is a very interesting story. I really like your writing style and all the details you include. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
    April 7th, 2016 at 04:48pm
  • dawn of light

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    I am so curious to read more about this couple! Very excited to see what direction you will take for this interesting plot! I haven't read that book but I am very close to picking it up Wow you have such a swell way with words. Also, I liked the small details about the main characters (especially about school and tuition). Very excited to read more!
    April 6th, 2016 at 08:42am