Always Want to Feel This Way - Comments

I'm already in over my head! I love this! I really like how vague it is, but you still have enough to connect to the characters. It is such a cliché, but it's so well written and interesting that you don't even notice. It's not your typical story. I absolutely love times a million how you're using the car crash throughout the story. I love stories like that, where you know it's not a good idea and you know you'll only get hurt, but you can't manage to stop. I can't wait for more!

Can't wait for an update! I'll casually be over here rereading this over and over until one comes.

Yayyyyy! An update! Liza and Sam, eh? It's starting to get really fun and I can't wait to see where this goes. Hoping the next update comes quick!

Just re-read the entire thing while waiting for an update. Hope you're doing well and just busy and not sick or anything like that!

I don't think I even noticed we don't know their names. I loved the chapter and I can't wait for another one. I'm very excited for the party!

I kind of like the mystery of not knowing their names, but I'm also a huge name nerd and it's killing me not knowing. So I'm torn! I imagine him having some preppy name and her a cute, elegant one with a little bit of spunk, but what do I know? Hahaha! But I love this update and how you're leading us in to them getting to know each other slowly. I just love this story so much and can't wait for the next update!

So so so good. I love how the car crash thing is still tied in, specifically at the end of the chapter. You continue to blow me away. I can't wait for the next few chapters/the rest of the story!

Thanks for the shout out

I'm loving this story so much so far! It's so different to read a story in second person, but it works so well here. Curious as to if we'll ever learn their names or if that will be a nice little mystery. Update soon!

Summary/Layout: Overall amazing. The colors are perfect. The summary layout makes me smile. I just love how the lyrics are set to the right and the actual summary itself is towards the left. Speaking of the summary itself I just love "But it's our cliche."

Chapter 1: I just love this as the introduction. I'm already falling in love with this. This line specifically I find wonderful. "Our lives should have been running parallel, never meant to cross."

Chapter 2: It's official I love this. I love the narrative and first impression that she has of him. I also love the casual mention of the fact she used to collect uni t-shirts. It's a cool little quirk I don't think I've really seen in a character before.

Chapter 3: The chunk of text that is the dialogue is genius. The fact that she hasn't worn the shirt from the college she's going to speaks volumes.

I can't wait to see where this goes! Update soon because this is a new addiction.

I definitely love this flow you got going on for your chapters. It's sweet and straight to the point. I love that it's all short, as well~ it's more empowering in a way

Her mindset isn't too much, you know? So I love that! It's realistic and pretty much similar to the way I think (like the way she views thing hahah). Great job!

Love the summary. Thought it was really nicely written; almost poetic.

The second chapter did a really great job of setting up the story. I loved that it was short and sweet, but it still gave a lot of information. I thought it was great that you pulled the chapter together by having that connection between the first and last sentences.

I think you did a great job of describing the guy from the narrator's point of view (rather than subjectively). I think we learn a lot about both the guy and the narrator just from how she describes him and the things she notices about him. Her being so critical of him, as a person living in a town that becomes a tourist hotspot, seemed very realistic to me. You can feel all the bitterness she has for his type.

I also thought it was really nice how he brings back this bit of nostalgia for her, even if it's not necessarily a pleasant memory. I feel like that might be some foreshadowing for their relationship in the future.

Overall, I like this story so far. I'm definitely subscribing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

@ Mogar
@ dawn of light

awwwww thank you so much for commenting! I'm so glad you are enjoying it.

This is a very interesting story. I really like your writing style and all the details you include. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

I am so curious to read more about this couple! Very excited to see what direction you will take for this interesting plot! I haven't read that book but I am very close to picking it up you have such a swell way with words. Also, I liked the small details about the main characters (especially about school and tuition). Very excited to read more!