Pack Is Family - Comments

Thanks! There's definitely more coming :)

Just stumbled across this today!! Absolutely love it!!

@ TheDevilsHalo;
you're welcome <3

@ Red Christmas Devil
Thanks

So much going on! But in a good way! I like how the wolf gene from Madison's dad skipped a generation (er, well kind of xD) and even as a baby, Logan's werewolf genes are kicking in. And Derek doesn't seem too surprised that he created a child with Madison, not that I'm surprised because he always seemed so stoic and lone wolf-ish in the show (like Edward Cullen but without being overly intimidating and... pushy).

You have an awesome story here, Mandy and I hope you update this soon (when you can and are able to of course. )

@ jekyll and hyde;
Thank you :)

Amazing update

I am not familiar with this fandom which I had to read as an original. The title itself made me realize that this story was going to be based on werewolves. At the beginning I was a little confused because I didn't know what happened to Madison other than what I read on the summary. It would have been better to read a little background on the reason she had to leave her son in the hospital even though she was released, but also not expressing anything that happened during her pregnancy or when her mother took her gives suspense to the story. You managed to give me conflicted thoughts in a good way. The vocabulary used is very simple and understandable.

Seeing Derek, who I learned later is the father of her child, most have been a very difficult experience for Madison. It was shown in the way you described her emotions, which is great by the way. Him leaving after she confessed that he had a son gives the plot a more dramatic reaction to the story which makes it real.

The blog and layout are gorgeous and fits the story well. I am curious to see where this goes. Great piece!

@ matthew sanders;
Thanks :) I have loads of ideas and notes lol

This is really good already. I can't wait to see where you take this hon!