September 16th, 2017 at 12:59pm
@ Shatterheart
Oh goodness! That's such a compliment, thanks! It's impossible for me not to write my female characters in a way that I envision a 'strong female' to be written but the most difficult part is to make her more than just that, like have her make mistakes and such (something we'll see for sure). And I'm a little back and forth on how I want Theo and Florence's relationship to be romance-wise, I'm always worried about developing things too fast or unnaturally so it's great it seems to be received as natural! Thanks again for the comment, much appreciated!!
beautiful writing, beautiful layout, and bad ass main female. Well done <3
Chapter one:
This totally reminds me of a dark twist on the little mermaid, dude I'm totally in love with this the fact that the sea witch is asking her for the blood of an honest liar got me so damn excited for whats to come dude, I can't even with this how excited I am to catch up on this and to read things through all the way. I feel bad that her father was killed by a hunter like that totally upset me I lost my father and I'm like, angry that the hunter killed her father.
Why do I have a bad feeling about this Priscilla? I have a bad feeling.