The Trade - Comments

  • delicate.

    delicate. (100)

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    Ghoul of 2016
    Gender:
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    This was super cute! I really enjoyed it focusing on a trade - I feel like that is a plot not often used. I felt sad for Eric and Audree at the beginning, as that would be a difficult thing to go through. I can't imagine being so far away from the person you love and them watching them be criticized. I think you really captured the uncertainty around trading. I thought the part about Audree's birthday "surprise" was adorable. I was also pleasantly surprised by Eric showing up with a proposal. Definitely made my heart warm and fuzzy. Thank you for the lovely entry! Great job! :)
    May 7th, 2016 at 05:08pm