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  • swell

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    dude i just caught up and OKAY LOOK I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER STAT
    this angst isn't as heartwrenching as it was for me for like this BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN IT STILL DOESN'T MAKE MY HEART DO FLIPPY FLOPS
    bc it does
    it fkn does
    also, gOOD ONE ISAAC
    WHAT TYPE OF DARN RESPONSE IS THAT
    March 8th, 2017 at 12:27pm
  • Michael Westen

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    This burn is killing me. They need to just talk, but I get it. It's hard.
    March 5th, 2017 at 04:29am
  • Michael Westen

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    This is just so relatable. The very fact that Alex isn't okay, that he says he hasn't been feeling good, it cuts deep. And Isaac I just... I feel for him. I feel for them both.
    March 4th, 2017 at 04:55pm
  • Michael Westen

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    Oh man. I can't wait to see what Isaac is up to.
    March 3rd, 2017 at 02:44pm
  • Michael Westen

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    Oh. My. God.

    This is just so heart breakingly good/amazing/beautiful...

    I want to have more words but nothing I can say shines any sort of light on how wonderful this story is.
    February 27th, 2017 at 06:53am
  • Michael Westen

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    The end of the first bit sounds like he's trying to reassure himself.

    I think I just realized that Alex doesn't feel like he's worthy of Isaac, but maybe I'm wrong?

    ALEX LOVES ISAAC.
    February 22nd, 2017 at 07:08pm
  • Michael Westen

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    I feel like you're placing my heart in a blender and trying to decide which setting will be best for destroying it. So far, I'm okay with that.

    But are Alex and Jeremy having an affair? Because if so I'll find a way to insert myself into the story just to kick someone's ass.
    February 21st, 2017 at 02:36am
  • Michael Westen

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    The dialogue is always just so good. I'm literally laughing over the fact that the Christmas tree got knocked over and he's just like "Happy birthday, Jesus."

    This is starting to breaking my heart Sad

    This is so relatable.

    Update soon.
    February 18th, 2017 at 01:53am
  • Michael Westen

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    The way you use your descriptions is beautiful. I just wanted to tell you that. You've somehow managed to make a chapter light hearted and heavy at the same time and I can't help but find myself amazed.

    The dynamic between the two of them is just so fun to read. Personally they're quite intense but then when they talk to each other it's jokey and I find that great.
    Apple pie ice cream actually sounds delicious.

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    I'm leaving off at the end of chapter 6 and I plan on reading the rest when I get home but I wanted to leave this comment because I haven't left one in 4 days.
    February 17th, 2017 at 11:51pm
  • Michael Westen

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    Yasss.
    This is just so wonderful and I love it. And usually i can't stand 2nd person narratives but like the lovely Raveena said you do an amazing job with it.

    Can't wait for more In Love
    February 13th, 2017 at 04:23am
  • raja sahara

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    oh Fae, my bae, this amazing and I need more. I love the 2nd person narrative so much. You do it so well. If I did it, every sentence would start with "you" and it'd just be a trainwrekc. But you do it so beautifully, and the writing is so simple yet so deep, I love it.

    Though a small town boy in San Francisco? I wonder who that could be based off? Wink
    February 12th, 2017 at 06:50pm
  • Michael Westen

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    I don't know if I can handle this. It's already too good. It's already heartbreaking. I agree 100% with what Alex said. This is gonna fuck me up.
    February 12th, 2017 at 05:30pm
  • swell

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    look
    like I said before
    not the gay I wanted (initially) but I'M SO GLAD YOU DECIDED TO POST THIS ANYWAYS
    I CAN FEEL MY HEART READY TO BREAK
    BC I KNOW FAE
    I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE GOING TO DO
    YOU'RE GOING TO fuck ME UP
    You are like that ex I shouldn't return to because I don't want to get my heart broken again but I'm going to do it anyways because somewhere there were good feelings too
    I am ready.
    February 12th, 2017 at 04:44am
  • dawn of light

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    FAE OMG
    _ omg
    I need this
    May 8th, 2016 at 07:08am
  • swell

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    OH MY GOD I AM SO READY FOR THIS
    SO
    FUCKING
    READY
    May 8th, 2016 at 06:38am
  • slumflower

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    "Neil happened when you were eighteen, but his love came in bursts when he knew yours was unwavering." I can't wait, I can already tell how beautiful this is going to be!
    May 8th, 2016 at 03:04am
  • oh bear

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    Happy face my body is ready
    May 8th, 2016 at 02:12am
  • saeglopur

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    Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
    May 8th, 2016 at 12:30am
  • kaul hilo

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    Basically, YOU ALREADY KNOW HOW PSYCHED I AM FOR THIS
    because you're going to do this brilliantly because your writing and agagahhhhhh
    plz
    May 8th, 2016 at 12:25am
  • Michael Westen

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    I'm so ready/excited for this! The summary/layout are both so amazing. I hope you post a chapter soon!
    May 7th, 2016 at 11:58pm