Hello! This story is super interesting but I saw a teeny mistake in the first chapter that I wanna point out.
"Mi Bella" doesn't exist in Italian. If you're going for "my beautiful" then it's "la mia bella" or "bella mia". If you're going for "my beauty" then it's "la mia bellezza" or "bellezza mia".
I apologize if that sound super nitpicky but I just wanted to point that out. Otherwise, this is a really cool concept. I've never seen anyone write anything about Al Capone unless it was a non fiction book or something like that. I've only read the first chapter (and I loved how you ended it) so I'm going to keep reading now! Nice work :)