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  • hangsang.

    hangsang. (210)

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    Layout + Summary
    The layout is absolutely beautiful, as is the summary. I honestly love reading stories that hold a description. I'm so excited to read this!

    Content
    When I first started reading this, I got major Romeo and Juliet vibes, but as I kept going, those diminished. I love the fact that the two are basically from different worlds, even though they live near one another.

    I love the fact that Lilith offered her home as a place for Hoseok and his friends. It was a really sweet gesture, despite the fact that trusting is probably quite hard and the fact that she doesn't know any of his friends. I hope they're kind to her.

    I hope the government doesn't find out about anything. Oh no. I really hope they're able to make a safe getaway.

    Ah, I'm really sad one of Hoseok's friends died in trying to escape, but in a way, that let the others escape, so he should be regarded as brave. He probably wouldn't have been angry.

    I love how much emotion this one-shot packed. It was such a beautiful read. Well done!
    July 5th, 2016 at 10:22pm