I’ve started just about every comment with this. But I want to apologize for my total lack of commenting skills.
Anyway! To start! I love the layout! I don’t know what’s in store for the story just yet, but the layout really sets the mood. Simple and dark and ominous with those nooses. And I love witches! Can’t wait to read it!
I love the premise of the legend and that you started with it. It really helps to set the story and makes what happens really spooky. I love those creepy witch vibes and legends about witches. I would probably be that person camped out in a haunted place. That’s probably how I’m gonna go. Even though that’s a very terrifying way to go! Ahahaha. So I can sympathize with the victims.
To finish! I loved it! It was very short and my only complaint is that there isn’t more to read! But that’s not really much of a complaint because it was perfect as is. Your writing was beautiful and descriptive but still left a lot to the imagination. I should be reading these stories at night because I feel like I’ll get that creepier vibe better. Idk why I chose to read it in the afternoon with the sun shining. Anyway, I’ll get back to you soon about the contest! Thanks so much for joining! I enjoyed reading your story!
Anyway! To start! I love the layout! I don’t know what’s in store for the story just yet, but the layout really sets the mood. Simple and dark and ominous with those nooses. And I love witches! Can’t wait to read it!
I love the premise of the legend and that you started with it. It really helps to set the story and makes what happens really spooky. I love those creepy witch vibes and legends about witches. I would probably be that person camped out in a haunted place. That’s probably how I’m gonna go. Even though that’s a very terrifying way to go! Ahahaha. So I can sympathize with the victims.
To finish! I loved it! It was very short and my only complaint is that there isn’t more to read! But that’s not really much of a complaint because it was perfect as is. Your writing was beautiful and descriptive but still left a lot to the imagination. I should be reading these stories at night because I feel like I’ll get that creepier vibe better. Idk why I chose to read it in the afternoon with the sun shining. Anyway, I’ll get back to you soon about the contest! Thanks so much for joining! I enjoyed reading your story!