July 31st, 2016 at 05:01pm
the summary is goddamn adorable. sounds like romance, romance, romance w/ a sprinkle of fluff which truly isn't my cup of tea, but definitely a guilty pleasure from time to time (which is clearly obvious when i go looking for things of the such).
but hubba hubba, hello mr. uk. i would've been a puddle on the floor too if i was ebony. hot damn, that's my type of man tbh. there's no doubting how much mr. uk is into ebony too oh, how cute. he's shy too. wtf, don't you hate it when both parties are like that?? & you're just playing the waiting game?? lol.
aside from a few run-on sentences & the missing of a couple comma's, this was great c:
The layout for this is very cute. Roses are definitely romantic, and I love the addition of the book, as well. The font is a little small - but after I zoomed in a little it was fixed. The summary is as sweet and cute as the layout itself, which is lovely.
Content
I think the initial interactions between Ebony and Iggy are so authentic. I really liked that. I feel like many of us have been in a position with a customer we find attractive, hoping they'll come back or feel the same way.
I love how Beryl pushed the guy off onto Ebony for help, it was adorable! Shopping for a niece? So precious. I really like the development of their relationship. I found it very realistic, which is refreshing. I feel like so many stories (mine included) have romances that aren't that realistic, so this is really a great story.
I smiled when he came into the store to ask her out. So happy they are finally moving along. Iggy seems like such a dreamy guy!
This was such a lovely romance, and I eagerly await to see what happens next. I only found a few grammatical errors, but it didn't really hold me back from reading.
Nice job!