i really adore your summary bc it's clearly something i can relate to. jeez, it's like enough thought to make a chapter w/ no plot or story revolving it.
'she was odd & slightly standoffish, making obscure statements & letting her words fall off into silence.' there's a lot of power in this statement that i could relate to. & it's nice to see that he finds the beauty in this along with all her other little flaws & imperfections.
i also like the power of the ending paragraph. the little speel about love & what not, especially if it'll just be another list of lessons. interesting & very enjoyable read. i enjoyed it
'she was odd & slightly standoffish, making obscure statements & letting her words fall off into silence.' there's a lot of power in this statement that i could relate to. & it's nice to see that he finds the beauty in this along with all her other little flaws & imperfections.
i also like the power of the ending paragraph. the little speel about love & what not, especially if it'll just be another list of lessons. interesting & very enjoyable read. i enjoyed it