What Do You Want From Me? - Comments

Great job with the update!
Hmm... so they kind of know a bit more now. Not really, but at least they talked it over a bit. XD
Bothers me that she doesn't want to tell Alex. I'm on Jack's side with this, lol. I wonder what Alex is truly thinking and feeling though. Does he suspect anything? *thinking face emoji*
There were quite a few misspellings I spotted, I won't be annoying and point them all out, but just wanted to note that in case you want to proofread.
But I'm glad they were understanding, that shows what true friends they are to her. :) Excited to see what happens next.

I got the update notification, and I was like, yay! An update! :D
But then I got to the end and was like... NOOOO. You just got to the good part and it ended! UGH.
But great job with the chapter. You did a great job explaining Delaney's nervousness. It made me nervous as well for some reason, lol. Or well, I felt for her I guess.
And aww... Jack knows Alex loves her too. ;) He's great at hiding it, isn't he? XD
Noticed a few things, but not too bad.
First was the chapter titles. You made it '07' but after looking at the last chapter, you had it 'Chapter 6'. But then I looked toward the beginning again and for the first three official chapters, you did the '01, 02, 03'... so maybe just go back and change the titles of 4-6? Unless there's a weird pattern you're developing, lol. Otherwise, I would keep it consistent.
She meant it more as a statement, but it came out as more of a questions.
*questions should be question lol.
"I'm haven't really slept and I'm kinda starving.
The first 'I'm' should just be 'I'.
But other than those few things to point out, the chapter looked good. :) Hmmm... so now she has to explain herself. Will Alex know it's his baby? Will he think it's Jack's? :O Will she tell them the true story?
Interested in seeing what happens next! :) Hoping she doesn't prolong telling him for too long if she does... think that would cause more of a mess than there needs to be, but just my thought.
Can't wait for more! :)

Douche nozzle.. haha love it! Excited to read more, please update again really soon!

Oh gotcha.
And no problem. I'm sorry you're had rough times. I'm glad you've gotten inspired, though; hopefully that means things are a bit better. :)

I've been reading this for months, but I'm kind of a lurker, and I just want to say how happy I was when I saw this was updated.
I love it. It's so good.

@ Nanook
No I'm really glad you pointed these out. I changed doctor, and I reworded the other line to omit the use of sex or gender because I think in the medical field they are still used interchangeably. So to avoid any craziness, rewording!!!

I'm glad you're still sticking with me. I've had a rough few months so I finally got a little inspiration to post. Glad to know someone is happy about that!

Yay, you updated! :D Great job with the new chapter!
So Jack knows. :O Will he really be able to keep it from Alex? Will Delaney end up telling Alex anyhow?
Hey, if I was her, like he helped her get into this mess. He should help her with it as well. Psh. I mean I'm still for her being independent and all, she doesn't have to be with him but it would just be easier on her in the long run if he helped her.
Although I am kind of wondering what he's thinking right now, since he's been away from her for so long... hmm...
Two things I spotted that seemed a bit off:
“No, no. It’s nothing like that.” She said quickly, but didn’t get the chance to elaborate anymore before doctor Carter walked in.
I believe 'doctor' should be capitalized before the last name, since it's calling her by her official title.
And at this part:
When you’re about 5 months, we can talk about gender if you want to know it.
Technically, the doctor determines the sex, not the gender. Gender is something a person can personally determine about themselves, or their preference of what to be called as they learn more about themselves. Sex is what is determined as the baby's developing and just born... I think it's the scientific term for it. That's just the raw basics of it, lol, that probably just made it even more confusing, but that is what you want instead. Technically speaking.
Sorry, I often start to analyze as I continue with stories. Let me know if this is annoying, pointing stuff out... I'll solely focus on the content overall if you wish.
But I really enjoyed the chapter and am glad you posted again. Excited to see what you have in store next! :)

I just realized I never responded to your last comment. Saw another story was updated again, and saw that it's been a month since this one. :(
But I'm glad I was able to inspire you to update. :D I can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you choose to continue. <3

@ Nanook
You did inspire me to post! I have more written, but I'm thinking I'm going to change the direction the story goes in, so it's going to involve some serious rewriting.

I'm glad that you liked it =]

WELL... that took a turn. XD Damn, I feel so stupid for some of my predictions in the last comment now. I was not expecting this. lol.
But I knew as soon as I started reading the chapter and she was at the doctor's... oh boy. XD Just because that's not usually random; there's usually a reason when that happens in stories. But wouldn't it have been even more of a twist if that hadn't been the result of the visit? Just like a normal thing you chose to throw in there on a whim? XD
But anyway, it's happened now, sooo... hmm.... wonder what's going to happen now. Way to go, Alex. Way2go.
But great job with the update! Now I'm just anticipating the next chapter even more than I was this one! Ughhh... I appreciate that you updated though. :D I'd like to think my comment was of some inspiration to post... or maybe you just had it written and decided to put it up, idk. XD
But can't wait for the next! :D

Ummm... I seriously love this.
First of all, heyyyy girl heyyy. I read your one other story, like, last year, idk if you remember me or not, but... I just stumbled across this one.
And I love what you have of it so far. Why are there no other comments?! People on Mibba these days are seriously insane.
Anyway, I really love this because... so many reasons.
1) Alex clearly loves her. The ass is clearly hiding it. XD But I just love how he keeps accusing her of being with Jack when she's not. Like girl... his jealousy couldn't be more obvious if he tried.
2) I love how the main character, Delaney, has taken a stand. Like YAASSS girl, you don't need him if he won't commit (although I am team Alex and Delaney, but only if he stops being a douchebag).
3) I love how Jack is just an honest to God best friend and you're not messing with that. One of my pet peeves with stories (or okay, I guess it may depend on how it's swung) is when the best friend says he doesn't have feelings and then he eventually does and it just ruins everything. Like with this story, I can tell Jack isn't going to do that. And I realize it's probably ironic for me to say this considering that's kind of what Alex is doing, but... pshh, you get my point. Yes? Yes. XD
What Delaney needs to do is find herself a man that she actually dates that will get Alex even more in a fuss and like for real have his jealousy show. Because right now he's just speculating, but if he actually witnesses the relationship? That would be his karma for not making a move. But yes, she needs a relationship with someone outside of ATL. To make Alex jealous and to possibly help her grow. Or hell, even a fake relationship just to get some priceless reactions from Alex. That would be entertaining.
As I read your last chapter, I couldn't help but think "maybe she'll keep this true to time and update three months from now..." so you could skip time and it would make sense and that would just be an awesome irony. XD Although I'm more so hoping you'll update this sooner, because I seriously love it and would love to read more. Maybe this feedback will convince you, I hope it does. I'm seriously sorry that you haven't received other feedback; this story seriously is awesome so I don't understand why you haven't. :(
I will be here if you choose to continue with it, which I really hope you do. Seriously such a great writer. <3 If you have any other new stories, be sure to let me know girl. Also, I appreciate the fact that you're still writing Alex, because I feel like many have given up now that he's married, but seriously, who cares? It's called fiction for a reason, lol.
But yeah, really can't wait for more of this! Hope you post again soon! :)