Ain't Gonna Beg You to Stay - Comments

  • McDreamy;

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    I really like this I hope you continue this one. I like it better than the other, lol! I can't wait for more!
    December 6th, 2017 at 08:50pm
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    Chapter One

    Very nice introduction! I feel so sorry for Sabrina. Dumped after four years. That sounds so incredibly hard and heartbreaking.
    My first impression of Sabrina is that she is standoffish, but a wonderful girl when you get to know her. My first impression of Kat is bubbly and extremely social. I loved how you set up the two "love birds" meeting at a club. It was really realistic to me, and it was a good introduction to all the characters.

    THOSE DRESSES ARE GORGEOUS BY THE WAY!

    Chapter Two

    OH NO! I loved Sabrina's cold reaction to Norman. I laughed a lot when Norman had his full of himself celebrity moment telling Sabrina who he was. I wish that beginning scene was a bit longer. I wanted to see more interaction between them, and more of Sabrina's thoughts on the matter.
    It was still a very well put together chapter. I am hooked! I can't wait to see what Norman does to try and win Sabrina over.
    March 7th, 2017 at 08:15pm
  • McDreamy;

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    Really love this!
    August 13th, 2016 at 12:33am
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    Really love this!!!!
    August 13th, 2016 at 12:33am
  • Loves Light Blue

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    I love it so far! I can't wait for more! And love the gif at the end!
    July 15th, 2016 at 04:06pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Loved it. And love the gif at the end :)
    July 15th, 2016 at 04:06pm
  • Loves Light Blue

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    Loved it. And love the gif at the end :)
    July 15th, 2016 at 04:06pm