Very nice introduction! I feel so sorry for Sabrina. Dumped after four years. That sounds so incredibly hard and heartbreaking. My first impression of Sabrina is that she is standoffish, but a wonderful girl when you get to know her. My first impression of Kat is bubbly and extremely social. I loved how you set up the two "love birds" meeting at a club. It was really realistic to me, and it was a good introduction to all the characters.
THOSE DRESSES ARE GORGEOUS BY THE WAY!
Chapter Two
OH NO! I loved Sabrina's cold reaction to Norman. I laughed a lot when Norman had his full of himself celebrity moment telling Sabrina who he was. I wish that beginning scene was a bit longer. I wanted to see more interaction between them, and more of Sabrina's thoughts on the matter. It was still a very well put together chapter. I am hooked! I can't wait to see what Norman does to try and win Sabrina over.