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  • dawn of light

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    THIS. MADE ME LAUGH. SO MUCH.

    Okay so your writing never fails to either make me laugh or cry. This entry, without a doubt, made me red lmfao

    I liked that you wrote it similar to the way a tv show writer would write a script -- it was so light and smooth and everything comedy is made of it. Complete dialogue is difficult because you need certain characters to make the plot shine, and what you did here was amazing. Liam’s character made love him even more from Dick Dock. He's so awkward and precious, which made him real. I liked that he isn't trying so hard. Hailey, oh sweet Hailey HAHAHA. She’s so witty. I love that she’ll never run out of anything to say. She's the type of girl who’ll make you laugh or embarrassed at once lmfao

    You put even more good lightening on these characters to make them shine brighter. The whole atmosphere of this entry was likeable and hilarious. A person can reread this so many times but still laugh at the same quirks of these two lmfao I liked that this whole thing had an easy vibe to it. Like, there’s no stress or serious worry between the two of them. I loved this so much! BOMB AF LAYOUT TOO~ yeah you ella tehe Great job on the entry!!!
    December 20th, 2016 at 04:32am
  • She Said Poptarts

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    omg, this was so awkward and cute idk, Liam sounds adorkable.
    ALSO I LOVE HOW YOU PUT YOUR USERNAME IN THERE lmfao
    July 24th, 2016 at 10:20pm
  • iron and wine.

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    THIS IS MY FAVORITE THING EVER
    July 20th, 2016 at 07:47am
  • n. josten

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    R I G H T  H O L E  ?

    I KNOW I'VE SAID TWICE BUT I HONESTLY FEEL LIKE I JUST WATCHED A SEX ED VIDEO
    IN CLASS
    WITH OTHER PEOPLE
    AWKWARDLY GIGGLING

    THIS IS JUST SO AWKWARD WOW I can't believe I commented on this WOW
    July 19th, 2016 at 09:46am
  • n. josten

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    WHAT IS THAT SUMMARY WHAT EVEN IS THIS STORY ALEX lmfao
    July 16th, 2016 at 02:35pm