Okay so your writing never fails to either make me laugh or cry. This entry, without a doubt, made me red
I liked that you wrote it similar to the way a tv show writer would write a script -- it was so light and smooth and everything comedy is made of it. Complete dialogue is difficult because you need certain characters to make the plot shine, and what you did here was amazing. Liam’s character made love him even more from Dick Dock. He's so awkward and precious, which made him real. I liked that he isn't trying so hard. Hailey, oh sweet Hailey HAHAHA. She’s so witty. I love that she’ll never run out of anything to say. She's the type of girl who’ll make you laugh or embarrassed at once
You put even more good lightening on these characters to make them shine brighter. The whole atmosphere of this entry was likeable and hilarious. A person can reread this so many times but still laugh at the same quirks of these two I liked that this whole thing had an easy vibe to it. Like, there’s no stress or serious worry between the two of them. I loved this so much! BOMB AF LAYOUT TOO~ yeah you ella Great job on the entry!!!
Okay so your writing never fails to either make me laugh or cry. This entry, without a doubt, made me red
I liked that you wrote it similar to the way a tv show writer would write a script -- it was so light and smooth and everything comedy is made of it. Complete dialogue is difficult because you need certain characters to make the plot shine, and what you did here was amazing. Liam’s character made love him even more from Dick Dock. He's so awkward and precious, which made him real. I liked that he isn't trying so hard. Hailey, oh sweet Hailey HAHAHA. She’s so witty. I love that she’ll never run out of anything to say. She's the type of girl who’ll make you laugh or embarrassed at once
You put even more good lightening on these characters to make them shine brighter. The whole atmosphere of this entry was likeable and hilarious. A person can reread this so many times but still laugh at the same quirks of these two I liked that this whole thing had an easy vibe to it. Like, there’s no stress or serious worry between the two of them. I loved this so much! BOMB AF LAYOUT TOO~ yeah you ella Great job on the entry!!!