Sometimes Goodbye Is the Only Way - Comments

  • delicate.

    delicate. (100)

    Ghoul of 2016
    United States
    Layout + Summary
    I wish you had used a custom layout, but since it is not required, I can't hold it against you. I also wish you had included a summary to give readers a piece of what is to come.

    Overall, I really enjoyed this story. From what I've read of yours, your stories seem to have these tough and unique themes that I don't see often. I loved the incorporation of of Luke Bryan and also a hockey player. It was an interesting AU. I really felt for Alexis with all of it going on with Logan and Shea, but I could also understand why Shea would have a hard time.

    I did find a few errors, but nothing that kept me from reading on.

    Thank you for the entry. Good job!
    August 1st, 2016 at 01:07am