Layout + Summary I wish you had used a custom layout, but since it is not required, I can't hold it against you. I also wish you had included a summary to give readers a piece of what is to come.
Content Overall, I really enjoyed this story. From what I've read of yours, your stories seem to have these tough and unique themes that I don't see often. I loved the incorporation of of Luke Bryan and also a hockey player. It was an interesting AU. I really felt for Alexis with all of it going on with Logan and Shea, but I could also understand why Shea would have a hard time.
I did find a few errors, but nothing that kept me from reading on.
Thank you for the entry. Good job!
August 1st, 2016 at 01:07am
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I wish you had used a custom layout, but since it is not required, I can't hold it against you. I also wish you had included a summary to give readers a piece of what is to come.
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Overall, I really enjoyed this story. From what I've read of yours, your stories seem to have these tough and unique themes that I don't see often. I loved the incorporation of of Luke Bryan and also a hockey player. It was an interesting AU. I really felt for Alexis with all of it going on with Logan and Shea, but I could also understand why Shea would have a hard time.
I did find a few errors, but nothing that kept me from reading on.
Thank you for the entry. Good job!