Kübler-Ross Model - Comments

  • Michael Westen

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    THAT'S IT?!

    This was so well done. I had a feeling something wasn't what it seemed. Demetri and Elena had a great back and forth. I liked how Dr. Chen handled everything. And the overall style of this was fantastic.

    I'm actually doing a class research project on DID too, and I honestly feel like you did an amazing job. (I just went and looked at how you placed in the contest and I'm glad you won!)

    Seriously though, that's it? I'd love to see more of this.
    February 27th, 2017 at 07:04am
  • dawn of light

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    LOVE. YOU’VE DONE IT AGAIN, FAE. oops she did it again

    I love that this entry is focusing on three people. I liked that even though the scenes were quick, the readers really got a sense of who’s here. I really liked how Elena and Demetrius were totally different people. From the way they answered to the way the tone just crosses towards us nicely. You did that effortlessly. AND YOUR TWIST AT THE END. okay, when I first read it, I didn’t see that coming. But wow. The build up itself was a shocker and nicely written. WOW

    I also liked how you didn’t stray away from the twist itself. You didn’t try to leave forced clues throughout the first chapter. Brilliant!

    I love the way you wrote this because it’s somewhat cometic, despite being a crime entry. I say that only about certain parts during the interrogation lmfao You know how to individually showcase these characters with the wit and the whole fuck you persona. You didn’t over do it, and so the conversation didn’t feel forced.

    I am really digging this layout Wow it’s 100% sick Wow Great job!!!!
    December 22nd, 2016 at 12:44am
  • permanentdeclaration

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    If I could recc this a hundred times, I would. Honestly, this is an absolutely brilliant piece of writing. Bravo! Clap
    September 3rd, 2016 at 11:36pm
  • interstellar spaces

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    oh my god that ending
    August 18th, 2016 at 01:55am
  • Brittt

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    Do you plan on continuing this? This was really interesting. I want to know the motives behind Elena burning down the school. I get bullying was involved, but there had to be something behind it. hmm, lovely job though.
    August 17th, 2016 at 10:56pm
  • swell

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    omfg
    this broke my heart wtf you said YOU WOULDNT AND YOU DID
    poor dmitri :( bb just wants to live his life but DAMN ELENA
    the second chapter was so sad but ugh so good I love the way you ended it
    ripper story all around
    August 17th, 2016 at 06:16pm