Third Time Is the Charm - Comments

Oh my god, my heart...
This story was phenomenal!!! I am so glad you came into my life, Mibba Spouse!
I am in love with Trinity and Mark... and Trinity and Brian's friendship. Holy shit, so many goals in this story!
MORE TRINITY AND MARK!!!!

Omg I loooooooved the ending and I'm so glad things worked out!

Atleast they're talking! And he went to pick her up. Maybe things will work out for them. Obviously it was more for the both of them. And that there was a connection neither thought about happening but they were good together. Sometimes the best things are the unexpected things. Loved it!

IM SO EXCITED THAT I STARTED READING AGAIN AND I AM A TOTAL GLASS CASE OF EMOTIONS RIGHT NOW. like seriously my mind is racing. he realized about Ashley, she said fuck you to Ashley and Brian made her go to Florida. WHAT!? i think my favorite part was when she text him she had landed and with NO hesitation whatsoever he was just like "i gotta go." ugh. perfect. NOW IM READY FOR THE LAST CHAPTER

Thank goodness for someone who knows that she doesn't need to be with someone while drunk and that he respects ladies enough to say no. I love Bri and oh my he got her a flight. What an awesome guy

Yes! She does deserve more that what Ash was offering her. Hopefully Mark will reappear soon so they can work on things. Woooooh Bri is an awesome bestie! Loved it!

No! They were so perfect together! Why Trin? Why? Things have changed and she's being delusional about it. He knows it has and called her on it. Ugh I hope they fix it. Love it!

WHEE THEY WENT ON A DATE! i love it. and i feel like he would've found a way to bring her no matter what haha. took a girlfriend to Italy? i have a feeling it'll take him less time to do something more fabulous than that and i can't wait!

They're so cute together lol. And she's full of questions lol. She's right about that girl though, it wouldn't take a year to figure that out. Yay for meeting another person from his life. Love it!

Loved the update!

Jesus lord this is going to go so badly

Oh she's in so much denial that she can't see it's different with Mark. But certainly others can. One can hope Mark won't find out about that night with Ash but sadly I'm sure Ash will let it slip -_- . Loved it!

....loneliness and alcohol = no bueno. seriously. UGH THIS IS SO GOING TO BITE HER IN THE ASS. hopefully not literally. But dude. I love Melissa. end of story ;)

Noooooooooooo she can't sleep with Ash! Despite what either thinks there is something obviously more going on besides hooking up when he comes into town. Anyone watching them together could see that lol. Ugh big mistake lol , Love it!

whoa. that was kind of an intense chapter, dude. on one hand -- I was SO excited for the hand clap! every time I hear the song I kept remembering you said you were gonna put it in one of the stories but I couldn't remember which. sooo glad it was here! the quip to Melissa. hahaha. oh man. and dude -- I knew it was gonna bother Mark about Brian and Trinity more than it should. and again -- I still get he's being a best friend but dude. he's on the verge of overstepping that boundary and it's starting to get hella old real quick. JUST LET THEM ENJOY THEMSELVES DAMMIT.

Wooh for having a beach day with the friends! Lmao that would be a hard convo to have and Mark didn't bat an eye lol. Love it!

IM JUST SAYING.. I get where Brian is coming from but I'm totally with Melissa. I'm over himmmm. I get it. I really, really do. Thanks for being a cautious friend but there's a time and a place and that ship has sailed.

THANKFULLY WHAT HASNT SAILED IS MARK TREMONTI AND HIS FREAKING UNF-NESS UGH. that's perfectly planned. mmmm. no interruptions? yes please.

and HA. just saying. Now she needs to annoy the crap out of Brian for her sister. only fair. boom.

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I can't help it!!!! Have you SEEN Mark Tremonti?!?!?