this is very interesting. i totally feel the protagonist of course, being that i've been in that situation w/ drinking. when you realize it's not even noon & you're craving a good drink. lowkey feel like an alcoholic especially if you're in public or around peers.
i think the set up of this is very intriguing. & your unique writing style is very easy to follow c: i just read the first chap & found only a minor mistake.
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i don't want to look like i lunatic,
it's the last sentence of paragraph two.
overall, im going to come back & finish this off when i have some time! & also, kudos to walgreens for keeping shitty people like your protagonist & myself occupied bc it is a great way to kill time lmfao.
i think the set up of this is very intriguing. & your unique writing style is very easy to follow c: i just read the first chap & found only a minor mistake. it's the last sentence of paragraph two.
overall, im going to come back & finish this off when i have some time! & also, kudos to walgreens for keeping shitty people like your protagonist & myself occupied bc it is a great way to kill time lmfao.