Sam Is Typing - Comments

  • keigo takami.

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    So literally, I've been in the mood to read your work because you are a writer from the Gods, my friend. (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

    I am literally in love with this format??? Like, wow?! So many mixed emotions though. It brings back nostalgia and I just remember this specific chain mail that I got on Facebook back in 5th grade that I never forwarded, thinking I was going to die (♫ but here I am alive ♫). I am creeped out, which is great. Weird I am feeling the ooky, spooky, cooky, and creepiness of this, and I am living for it. σ(≧ε≦o)

    I love the interactions though. They seem like convos that I've had before, so they're very familiar. (✿´ ꒳ ` ) I'm still not over the formatting though tbh. I just love that you can capture the emotion in each chapter with literally no description, just full on dialogue (or in this case, text messages). Like wow, this is a literary masterpiece. Shout out to you though, because I am sure this was not easy to write.

    SAM, WHERE YOU AT?? WHO IS THIS??? You left me hanging, sis, gahhhh. Crazy

    OVERALL I LOVE THIS AND I WILL SHOW THIS TO MY CHILDREN, MY GRANDCHILDREN, MY GREAT GRANDCHILDREN, MY CATS, EVERYONE. (love u bb xo)
    February 1st, 2019 at 11:56pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    These types of chain mail things always creep me the fuck out, pardon my wordage. I can't wait to see where you take this, even though I'm getting the heebie-jeebies just from thinking out it.

    I think you do a great job within this setting, of having to limit yourself to emails and texts. It takes a certain finesse, and I don't know a lot of people who could do this so well, and to this extent.

    Another thing that I can't get enough of is the personalities you are able to portray, even within a texting environment. I've always had an issue with that kind of stuff, but you do it flawlessly.

    Anyway, I cannot wait to see where you go with this exactly. Keep up the great work hon.
    August 21st, 2016 at 08:30pm
  • Michael Westen

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    Holy mother of God.

    Okay so first of all I love this, and I can only imagine how horrible it is to use this formatting, I'd go crazy. Secondly, apparently you only have 10 minutes to forward the message, so Sam is fucked either way by now.

    I love the characters and the banter. Description and scenes would only make this that much better.

    I can't wait for the next parts though, the way you ended this has me on the edge of my seat.
    August 20th, 2016 at 11:23pm
  • Brittt

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    okay so this totally gave me the creeps but I'm so glued to this story and I can't wait to read more. I wondered what happened to Sam tho. ok that's dumb because we all know what happened but hmmm who took his place
    August 20th, 2016 at 07:44am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Okay, so...I'm seriously on edge right now. This is really well done and I'm hooked, like...this is crack. Lol. But all joking aside, I need this to continue immediately, so update soon! Have a good day tomorrow; I'll just be right here, worried about Sam =P
    August 20th, 2016 at 06:49am
  • n. josten

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    Oh. Well would you look at that, I'm invested (ノʘヮʘ)ノ*:・゚✧ and on edge (ノʘヮʘ)ノ*:・゚✧ and really loving the dynamic between Sam and Robin (ノʘヮʘ)ノ*:・゚✧ but actually terrified of where this is going because no (ノʘヮʘ)ノ*:・゚✧

    Thank you. Have a nice day. Please update soon so I can continue stressing out because I'm going to go to bed now, stressed and on edge and wondering what is happening and where is Sam and I really need things to be okay and I just. AM NOT OKAY RIGHT NOW. PLEASE DON'T DO THIS TO ME, I AM STRESSED. YOU ARE STRESSING ME OUT.
    August 20th, 2016 at 06:30am