May 1st, 2017 at 07:35pm
@ jaxprog
okay...wow!! a lot to think about!
No seriously, thanks a lot...this is what i need to help me along...
When i first started this story I had big ideas about it but the longer it took to write the more I lost the flow of the plot/story/problems etc and so I tended to hurry and just try and get it out, which could be one of the reasons i flip flop as you put it.
I've considered rewriting the story a bit, do you think it's worth it? Or maybe I'll just start another story and see if I can construct it a little better...if i'm honest, i know this story is pretty terrible!
thanks for commenting...it means a lot to me and i'll keep it all in mind :)
Read that kindle book and think about all your content you wrote in the 25 chapters.
What does Laya want? What problem does Laya need to resolve? What will bring balance into her life?
Who will oppose Laya? Who may tempt and lead Laya astray from her goal?
There is much more to think about and this book will get you in the right direction.