Gentle Impulsions - Comments

oh pllllleaaaaaaaase don’t give up on this! i love this and Wicked and ugh ugh ugh

I really love this story :)
Btw in the paragraph before he asks her to marry him, you have Gerard twice instead of Seth

DO IT! Make her say yes.

I can see she's feeling a bit dramatic...hopefully Marcus can talk some sense into her. Seth can't always be jumping through a hoop of fire for her! He was shocked and it is plausible it could be johns..

Well she was dumb. He could have killed her! She's lucky Seth bailed her out

I’m obsessed! Update so I can love it more!

I'm glad she laid all the cards out on the table so that John knows that Seth isn't the enemy

So worth the wait <3

I'm so excited he went after her! And that she finally realized the only complication was her and it could all be so much more simple! Nothing like some make-up sex to to make good on their new relationship

Wait. Wait. Okay, I get that he could easily jump to that conclusion, but once she explained herself and he understood - rainbows and butterfly, right? I love the refreshing feeling your writing gives. Keep on typing!

I literally have no words at everything going on. Like. Please. Please keep writing.

Man she's going to have Seth jumping off a ledge at this rate. I'm really hoping that she just saying love you too John to not have him snap later when she goes to collect her stuff. If she really stays with him then she does not deserve Seth and should just get a new job

I don't know why she'd put Seth through this. It's like I want you; let's have sex. Then, it seems she goes back to her boyfriend, but he does something bad again after emotionally punching Seth, she'll go back to him. I really think she needs to leave, but this whole emotional game with Seth isn't helping

I don't get why she stays. Seth needs to scare her into leaving. She doesn't realize what's more frightening is ending up dead cuzyou were hanging on to a memory. I would just not come home. Pretty sure using some of the inheritance to move into the safe place would make her dad happy other than staying with abusive boyfriend

so...she's gonna smell like guy again when she goes home? or will she even go home because she should really leave the ass of a boyfriend she has

I like this story...can't wait for more

Ignore my last comment I just saw!

hey! Is this a re-write or repost because I've read this story before. I'm glad it's back though since I couldn't find it anymore.

Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens.

Super interested in this