Elite Fatigue - Comments

  • Syrena

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    What an excellent second chapter! You have given us an interesting glimpse into this facility, but have left enough unanswered questions for future chapters. I can't wait for Micah to go exploring and to talk to Oscar some more. I already like Oscar, he seems so cute!

    Overall, I am just really looking forward to your next chapter, and can't wait to find out more!
    November 27th, 2016 at 06:08pm
  • Syrena

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    I really like the names, especially Tarquin. And that ending is so well done! I love your writing style, it is very eloquent and descriptive. Keep going please! I'm hooked.
    November 24th, 2016 at 12:01pm