The Fighter - Comments

  • Lovesxchokehold

    Lovesxchokehold (100)

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    I just stumbled upon this Story, and I must say I absolutely love where it's going!
    June 16th, 2017 at 08:04am
  • warmaiden

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    i'm shocked this doesn't have comments because i absolutely adored this piece. i love how it's gia & her dog. it gives off a heavy "i am legend" type of feel which is something i absolutely adore. lucky for gia to be a soon-to-be wildlife ranger since that'll come in handy.

    i like how in the beginning, you detail why gia left her previous group, but don't go into an overburdening amount of it. simple & to the point which is always a good call. i also like her stubbornness where even though she almost had a few calls, she refused to go back & stick it out. must've been one hell of an argument.

    "gia currently looked like someone had crawled out of hell after fighting her way through it." POWERFUL. shit, that gave me chills.

    very interesting what you have going on. i enjoy the interactions between gia & the group, especially how she seems to fit in between the spaces of daryl, rick, & glenn.
    May 21st, 2017 at 07:57am