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  • igotapapercut

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    Omg!! I love it all. I binged read this and I can't wait until the next few chapters and sequel! I hate Theo! I love Draco <3 I can't wait to see what Laila does next
    August 13th, 2017 at 09:51pm
  • Desert Moon

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    Fantastic story. I like that it's a female witch struggling with what Malfoy apparently did in the series. Nice twist. Also I have a revenge fantasy of me hexing the living shit out of Theo for what he's done. Laila laughed in his face after daddy Nott passed away. I would have too. xD
    August 9th, 2017 at 04:21am
  • LaniLoser

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    this was great. great update. im so glad this all happened!
    August 4th, 2017 at 06:08pm
  • ivylyn

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    Thank god he's out of the way. I hope Draco forces himself into her life again. Great update!!!
    August 4th, 2017 at 03:11pm
  • Pensgirl6687

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    This is amazing! Keep the updates coming!
    August 2nd, 2017 at 06:31am
  • Desert Moon

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    I really love this one!!! In my petty revenge mind, I would have used my magic to annoy the living hell out of Pansy and Theo. xD
    August 1st, 2017 at 04:46am
  • LaniLoser

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    not sure about the first person idea. you could try one and see how it goes. but i love this update. hope to read more soon. (:
    July 24th, 2017 at 06:51pm
  • ivylyn

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    This is a great story!! I can't wait for more updates. It's exactly what I've been looking for.
    July 24th, 2017 at 04:39pm
  • LaniLoser

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    Very Happy oh good! i like this story because usually i find draco stories of him getting the dark mark and the girl taking care of him and supporting him. or him defying the dark lord and not getting it. ive only read one other story where the lead girl gets the mark and i really love it. its such a great twist. id love to read more!
    July 20th, 2017 at 02:07pm
  • xofindyourlove

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    @ LaniLoser
    Thank you!! I had started the next few chapters but wasn't sure if I liked where it was going, so I've been fixing it up! The next chapter will be out soon!
    July 20th, 2017 at 12:37am
  • LaniLoser

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    ah please! more of this i wanna know what is next!
    July 19th, 2017 at 06:03pm
  • AndyChaotic;

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    Ugh THIS IS BREAKING MY HEART BECAUSE I JUST WANT THEM TO BE TOGETHER.
    July 14th, 2017 at 05:42pm
  • LaniLoser

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    yessssss
    July 5th, 2017 at 07:19pm
  • HawkGurl93

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    Well shit. I just read all of it, and that's amazing beyond words. Did not expect to see the kill me line
    July 3rd, 2017 at 06:05pm
  • AndyChaotic;

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    OMG YOU GAVE ME A SHOUTOUT. OMG YOUR'E AMAZING <3 Also I lovee this chapter <3
    June 29th, 2017 at 11:16pm
  • electrovoid

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    This is such a cool concept. Can't wait for the next update!
    June 29th, 2017 at 04:49pm
  • LaniLoser

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    ah please keep writing.
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:03pm
  • LaniLoser

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    ah please keep writing.
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:03pm
  • LaniLoser

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    ah please keep writing.
    June 20th, 2017 at 06:03pm
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    I found my spark back with it so I'm gonna ride it out and see where it goes! I posted a new chapter so check it out! Things are about to take off
    June 18th, 2017 at 08:21pm
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