Undeserving - Comments

:O You like the poem? Woo hoo! It's honestly my favorite part of the story...and originally there wasn't a story to go with it, but I thought people wouldn't like it since it's not exactly...standard poetry. :P Adri insisted I write a story to go with it, heh

The poem in the beginning is beautiful and perfect! And the world you describe is stunning! I like the little bits you've given so far because it's not too much and it isn't too little. I hope you update soon :)