The Last of Them - Comments

  • Michael Westen

    Michael Westen (450)

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    There are so many unanswered questions and I love it. What happened to everyone? Why are all the plants dead? When was the last time this character even ate? Why is she the only one left? This story has so much potential.

    I get how you feel about hating your writing though. We are our own worst critics. With that said I think you're actually really good and I look forward to seeing where you take this.
    February 17th, 2017 at 09:36pm
  • Queen of Dreams Hina

    Queen of Dreams Hina (885)

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    Hey don't be so hard on yourself. I'm actually interested in what's going on. Like what caused the tomatoes to die off like that? And what's going to happen to the girl?! Just take it slowly. Remember the Lord of the Rings series wasn't written in one day. Ad J.R.R. Tolkien was a beginning writer too! Anywho, you did a great job with the beginning and i can't wait to read more Arms
    February 17th, 2017 at 05:19pm
  • Michael Westen

    Michael Westen (450)

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    What??? This sounds like it's going to be intense. I can't wait.
    February 16th, 2017 at 01:04am