I really like this story. It has a good flow to it and it's not moving too fast. I love the main character already she seems real easy going and I think I would enjoy being her friend. I'm intrigued by the fact she's looking for her real dad. It adds an air of mystery and really pulls you in. I think you did a very good job on this story, I really enjoy it.
July 18th, 2017 at 12:58am