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  • midnightmssuki

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    @ justSJ
    I always deal in happy endings. Can't promise getting there is drama free though. Wink
    September 17th, 2017 at 01:38pm
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    @ justSJ
    I always deal in happy endings. Can't promise getting there is drama free though. Wink
    September 17th, 2017 at 01:38pm
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    @ midnightmssuki
    Oh yay! Hope it is a happy one, not a sad one (i.e. break ups, cheating or other things that will make me sad haha)
    September 14th, 2017 at 07:17am
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    @ justSJ
    I'm working on one. Smile
    Glad you've enjoyed enough to read it more than once.
    September 13th, 2017 at 10:10pm
  • justSJ

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    I keep re-reading this! I love it so much. Hope you wrote a sequel :)
    September 13th, 2017 at 11:35am
  • justSJ

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    I keep re-reading this! I love it so much. Hope you wrote a sequel :)
    September 13th, 2017 at 11:35am
  • dogandbutterfly

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    @ midnightmssuki
    Sounds like a great idea to me, too! Wink
    June 29th, 2017 at 07:34pm
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    @ dogandbutterfly
    Fingers crossed! I would really like to follow their first year in Vegas and see what adventures they have.
    June 29th, 2017 at 05:49pm
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    That was the perfect ending -- like those sugar flowers on the wedding cake! Great job...can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next! Hopefully these two in Vegas! Very Happy
    June 29th, 2017 at 02:58pm
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    @ Thatmom
    I'll try my best to make all the ors ands. There's lots of ideas to be dealt with. :)
    June 29th, 2017 at 12:56am
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    Awwwwww!!! Such a beautiful proposal!!! One suggestion in your authors note.......please change all of your ors to ands:) I promise to read every single one!!!
    June 28th, 2017 at 01:20pm
  • FootieJo

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    aww he proposed so cute. glad everything worked out and they are together
    June 28th, 2017 at 01:06pm
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    @ midnightmssuki
    Love the silent investors!!!
    June 28th, 2017 at 01:51am
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    @ Thatmom, @ FootieJo
    So of course that whole chapter needed some editing from its initial inception given the expansion draft and all. I know that finding a space and renovating it, and getting all the equipment for it from the ground up is expensive from my own work life and I imagine it'd be even more costly imagine in a city like Vegas. She could get a loan, or I can write a story about the three silent partners in a bakery. :) Plus I just like the idea that the boys accept her as much as they do James, maybe even more so. She's one of them.
    June 27th, 2017 at 11:25pm
  • FootieJo

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    woah the boys nearly made me cry offering her the money. I get why she doesn't want to take money from James. I'm just happy she's going with him
    June 27th, 2017 at 01:45pm
  • Thatmom

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    Swoon at the boys investing comments:)
    June 27th, 2017 at 01:39pm
  • Thatmom

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    If she doesn't go I may have to go and bake cookies for him. I love that they talked things over.
    June 27th, 2017 at 03:56am
  • dogandbutterfly

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    I hope she and Kathryn come up with an agreement -- sounds like a plan to me!
    June 26th, 2017 at 05:40pm
  • FootieJo

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    I hope she goes with him. I don't think he'll come out and say he wants her to move cos he knows she loves Nashville but suggesting options like getting Kathryn to run the shop was a good way of saying he wants her to move than actually saying those words cos he wants her to make the decision not him make it for her
    June 26th, 2017 at 03:48pm
  • dogandbutterfly

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    Great update -- I can understand how hard it was to write some of those games! I'm still not over it. And now with this expansion draft foolishness...ugh. Thanks for a ray of sunlight in a dark hockey world!!
    June 21st, 2017 at 05:10pm