That was the perfect ending -- like those sugar flowers on the wedding cake! Great job...can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next! Hopefully these two in Vegas!
Awwwwww!!! Such a beautiful proposal!!! One suggestion in your authors note.......please change all of your ors to ands:) I promise to read every single one!!!
@ Thatmom, @ FootieJo So of course that whole chapter needed some editing from its initial inception given the expansion draft and all. I know that finding a space and renovating it, and getting all the equipment for it from the ground up is expensive from my own work life and I imagine it'd be even more costly imagine in a city like Vegas. She could get a loan, or I can write a story about the three silent partners in a bakery. :) Plus I just like the idea that the boys accept her as much as they do James, maybe even more so. She's one of them.
I hope she goes with him. I don't think he'll come out and say he wants her to move cos he knows she loves Nashville but suggesting options like getting Kathryn to run the shop was a good way of saying he wants her to move than actually saying those words cos he wants her to make the decision not him make it for her
Great update -- I can understand how hard it was to write some of those games! I'm still not over it. And now with this expansion draft foolishness...ugh. Thanks for a ray of sunlight in a dark hockey world!!
I always deal in happy endings. Can't promise getting there is drama free though.