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Lol this was too cute! I'm not entirely certain the technical implications of flirting while on the job, nor how apt I would be to respond, but it was still cute!

Black coffee is gross though.

Aw, that was cute. I know everyone else has said that but it really is. I liked the simplicity of it, it really was just a girl going out to get coffee and getting a bit more than she expected. Like She Said Poptarts said, she was much more bold than I would have been. I would have just taken off and possibly never gone into that coffee shop again

I'm usually one for lots of description, but I think a nice balance of dialogue and description worked well for this story. It didn't need to be super fluffy or be packed with a bunch of hard hitting emotions. It was just simple and cute and a sweet little story to read.

Good job!

Aw, this was short and very cute! I know that term seems to be overused, but that's what this was. It was hella cute, I like how straight-forward it was. It was just a regular day with little something extra. Sarah is a lot braver than I expected, which is refreshing. I would've just looked up smile, and ran the hell out of there. And then I would try to muster up the courage to go back the next day.

This was such a sweet read!

This was so cute! I love how it all started out just like normal day, a normal conversation, and then the small comments and how quickly Darren responded to everything Sarah said. That was already a really tender moment. And then the adorable little note on her cup!

Listen, I love little stories that take place in a coffee shop, and your story is one of the biggest reasons why. By the end, I had a huge grin on my face. There's a part of me that wants to know more (like how their dinner went), but I'm also super okay with not knowing because you also wrapped this one-shot up so nicely.

Great job!

The layout is so adorable! Very delicate and pretty. I giggled with Sarah, ahahah. Goes to show how relatable the plot is and how wonderfully the words are strung together. The ending was perfect! It left room for the imagination, and I can definitely imagine their future love story! Loved it!

This is really beautiful. I love this piece because it shows tenderness and honesty between the two characters. You managed to capture the description of the setting very well. I felt like I was in that coffee shop, watching the characters interact. The layout is absolutely beautiful and delicate, which goes very well with the story. You have a great writing style. This was a great read.

sooOooOoo cute!

I agree with the lovely ladies below me, this is cute.

Awww this is so cuuute! You did an amazing job with this drabble and I agree with what Mandy said! <3 And such a beautiful layout too!

I really like this, it's cute and shows a different side to your writing ability. The message on the cup made me smile and I personally think that it's small gestures like that, that can really make a change in somebody's day. Great read :)