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  • hangsang.

    hangsang. (210)

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    God, I'm loving this description already, and the first line, Breathe in, breathe out was perfect. I'm already living for this!
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    You think that perhaps your downfall started when you fell in love with him.
    Such a powerful line! And I really love the repetition of breathe in, breathe out. I really think it's a nice touch.
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    He steps a little closer uncertainly and you have the haziest impression that it seems as if he’s approaching a wild animal that he doesn’t want to chase off, but he doesn’t want to get bitten either.
    Another favorite line, omg! It's so perfect the way he's approaching Leif and I think you captured it amazingly.
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    And you wonder how you can be so dark that you taught an angel how to brace himself for ruthless teeth when all he ever did was teach you what tenderness felt like.
    OH MY GOD. Okay, I know I'm basically just sending you your own lines, but I'm so in love with this entire thing that I can't just send it all to you, so I'm just going with specific lines that I love. This is a specific line that I adore.

    "YOU ARE MORE THAN AN ILLNESS" OH MY GOD I'M SCREAMING AT THIS POINT OKAY.

    I love that you began this one-shot with breathe in, breathe out and ended it just the same. As I said above, I love the repetition and I love the chemistry between Leif and Kasper.

    This was so beautiful and I'm so glad I've been graced with this! Excellent job!
    November 17th, 2017 at 07:26am
  • swell

    swell (150)

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    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    mY HEART AND SOUL ARE READY FAE
    I LOVE IT WHEN YOU FUCK ME UP
    November 2nd, 2017 at 11:30am