Keep Getting Closer - Comments

Skyler and Noah's relationship and how you described it was so lovely. The way Skyler felt fucked up, all the panic attacks, and Noah being there with him through it all. The way they met during holiday break at school. It all fit together so well. The flow of the was beautiful, as was the writing. I can't get over how much I loved their relationship and the dynamics behind it that you showed. There was so much emotion behind your words, and I could really feel it.

This was absolutely amazing!

This is absolutely brilliant! I love the relationship these two share and I can totqly understand how they complete each other, it's so well written and not super descriptive. It's got just the right amount of raw emotion I could feel my heartbeat quickening. If this were a book, I'd buy it in a heart beat. Very good job, I love it.

Loved this. So well written and beautiful, even though you're dealing with a topic which is not. You made that internal struggle of a damaged past seem striking and stunning, but prevented that romanticism of it. Brilliant work :)