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  • aubs

    aubs (420)

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    the guy
    I like how mysterious this chapter is. The Guy is introduced but who is he? All we know is that he is some random person who has it out for those eight people. Maybe it's someone that they all know... I mean, in my mind it makes sense because at this point, they are all random people (who I assume are connected to each other somehow), and this person could just be a person they ran into or even personally know. I just wanna know how they wronged him to come up with his evil plan of who knows what.

    otis
    I gotta say I love how modern this story is. It's something I don't normally see written into stories on here. I just love the tweets and how he's always on his phone (like any normal teenager would be).

    Oh gosh. I feel so bad for him and scared for Otis at the same time. I mean, it sucks that he was outed like that by some stranger, a stranger who snuck into his house just to take the picture. I mean, that's pretty creepy. But I'm sure his relationship isn't going to end well after the picture went viral.

    giselle
    So she's a model and has know Otis since childhood. Great. There's their connection with each other. And Paige. The girls are friends and know Otis. There are three people connected at the moment.

    I chuckled when she was complaining and looking out for paparazzi. It's just something that I've never really thought about with celebrities; you've really shown that it is something that they are always looking out for and hoping that they won't find when they want to be left alone. But I do like how she handled them in the end. I mean, if I were here, I would flick them off too.

    Oh goodness, now she's getting strange, personal pictures. I wonder what is going to happen to her.
    Anyway, I absolutely love this story so far. The plot is interesting, the characters are unique, and just everything about this is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens in future chapters!
    August 11th, 2017 at 03:29am
  • Brittt

    Brittt (100)

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    i'm really enjoying this so far. i'm excited to see where you take this!!
    July 26th, 2017 at 04:22pm