First off, the layout is soooo cute! But I'm sure you don't want to be reviewed on that, so let me talk about your story and how much I like it :)
It's written so fluidly and the conversation is completely natural. You captured well how normal humans interact, and although that doesn't seem like much, believe me it is, because so many people fail at that first hurdle.
The premise of this story has me really interested and I can't wait to see what unfolds. I'll certainly be subscribing!
It's written so fluidly and the conversation is completely natural. You captured well how normal humans interact, and although that doesn't seem like much, believe me it is, because so many people fail at that first hurdle.
The premise of this story has me really interested and I can't wait to see what unfolds. I'll certainly be subscribing!