Woman Be Damned - Comments

  • Nereid

    Nereid (930)

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    @ exploding boy.
    Thank you so much. It always makes me so happy when someone manages to see my imagery and metaphors so thank you so much for not only seeing them but appreciating and seeing the truth in them. You always say the loveliest things about my work and I'm so grateful.
    August 5th, 2017 at 08:55pm
  • nearly witches.

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    I adore the imagery in this, particularly in the end when the narrator talks about how both the mouse and the lion can bring down an elephant. I never thought about it in that way before, but it kind of makes sense -- there are different ways of approaching things and there isn't always simply one way to get to where you want to go / gain victory over something. There are multiple paths to take and you don't always have to be the gung-ho one to win the battle. I think you've captured this perfectly here in the semblance of what I'm assuming is a relationship, and it shows how two people can work effortlessly together and use different talents to reach the same common goal. A wonderfully strong message, and really well-written too.
    August 3rd, 2017 at 06:40pm