Vic, this is beautiful. I love the formatting of the short chapters in their differing POVs: you're telling us exactly what we need to know, no more and no less. While I'm not happy that it ends without a steadfast resolution, I hope the German lives. I feel like he may have been too proud to accept the help, though, and have chosen to die for his country instead (as much as he doesn't want to die).
April 16th, 2019 at 01:54am