Build-a-Boyfriend Workshop - Comments

Intro
Okay, I'm absolutely loving the way you opened this! It's so relatable already because there's such a huge pressure on people to date, especially young people. I'm so excited to keep going!

War Zone
I don't have much to say on the wedding because I can't even imagine getting questions like that. Part of me wishes she had actually said all those responses out loud, but it's good she didn't, for the sake of not ruining the wedding.

Fire-Crotch Phone Call
I really enjoyed this chapter! Judge was funny and I can't even count how many times I ended up laughing.

I really like what you have so far and I'm definitely going to be continuing this! Well done!!

First of all, this layout is awesome. Although I can't tell if you (the author) is speaking to the reader in the summary or the narrator of the story. But the warning made me laugh

The intro is hilarious and so relatable lol because I'm that person, I'm awful at dating. And the first chapter flows so well, I like your writing a lot. I wish the first chapter was a longer and more stuff was happening, but I did like the entire thought process of being at a wedding.

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What was people’s fixation with the status of my love life?

Highkey get asked this all the damn time and I'm only 22

My only issue with this is the formatting because a lot of line are squished together in a "paragraph" that probably shouldn't be (ex. the line that starts with "I was the stranger that braved to come stag).

But other than that, I love this story and I'm definitely going to keep reading

The little girls at the tea party reminded me of my best friend's daughter, Ivy. She's about to turn four, and she is sassy and brutally honest. (Although she is currently going through a phase of calling every female she meets "beautiful".)

It really does feel like everyone notices your singleness when you are long-term single. Even a bunch of six-year-olds. But maybe they're on to something. If you just try really hard.... Nope. Lol. I should know.

"Even my imaginary boyfriends were sassy."

It happens.

If this is the way things get worked out in her mind, I'm jealous. I just have boring thoughts, not conversations with my wonderful art work... Lol. I'm still loving this and eagerly awaiting the next update. I know your characters are based on real people and it makes them so relatable. Plus, you're not afraid to be weird. This is honestly like nothing else I've ever read on here.

Really unique, and this is really amazing, I adore it!

This has had me laughing for the last 20 minutes. And I can so relate to most of her thoughts on being single. I'm hooked! Can't wait for more!

Was I ever this funny? I don't remember being this funny. Was this when I was in Germany? lmao

Yes! i love it so far. Can't wait to read more.

I honestly love this first chapter so much! I have a feeling I am going to be able to relate to this story so much. Even though the first chapter was short it made me smile, and even giggle... the handbook. I most certainly need to get my hand on that! I am curious to see where you take this and will be waiting patiently for you to update :) such a great start!
Sub and recced :)

I honestly love this first chapter so much! I have a feeling I am going to be able to relate to this story so much. Even though the first chapter was short it made me smile, and even giggle... the handbook. I most certainly need to get my hand on that! I am curious to see where you take this and will be waiting patiently for you to update :) such a great start!
Sub and recced :)

Okay I haven't even started this yet but already I have a feeling I am going to enjoy it, your summary was so good! Right I am off to read the first chapter... I love the warning you added in

I can't wait to read more. I feel like the intro would make a really good summary page. It was short and nice, really can't wait to read more :)