OH MAN, I'VE BEEN SO EXCITED FOR THIS AND NOW I HAVE TWO CHAPTERS TO READ. I'M SO STOKED!! Ahem, okay, now onto a more serious comment:
Prologue I love that you started this out with the funeral. Not only that, but with 7 yo little Chase. I think it packs quite a punch that you had him dealing with his mother's death at such a young age. His uncle is so Good, staying with him like that. I feel so bad for Chase.
Can I just say that I love the fact that Chase is gay? It's so nice to see!
OH NEVERMIND, SCREW CHASE'S UNCLE! I hope Dean kicks his sorry ass when he comes into the picture. Or Chase does it himself. Either way, I hope he gets what's coming to him for sure.
Oooh, I'm wondering how he changed and if it's in a good or bad way. Does this mean he's going to get his revenge on Dwayne?
I feel so bad for Chase. What a horrible life to live. I hope he's able to find happiness sooner rather than later. And Dwayne. God, instead of helping his nephew he just throws him in the basement? God, what an ass!
"Why did you abandon me?" Welp, that's it. I'm dead. That line right there has killed me.
Chapter One Yeah, Chase, tell him! Get onto Dean for abandoning you and your mother! In all reality, though, I hope they're able to work things out and reconcile.
YOUR FATHER WAS FRAMED, BBY! IT WAS A SHAPESHIFTER! Sorry, I'm so into this story, so into it.
I love how Chase is willing to believe his father on the matter, even if he really doesn't. I hope he'll be convinced sooner rather than later. It was also really sweet of him to let Dean and Sam stay with him.
CHASE KILLED HIS UNCLE? Aw, hell yes! And good on his aunt for actually coming forward and telling the truth. It's true that Chase has had a rough life and something tells me it's going to get rocky all over again what with Sam and Dean in the picture.
If you can't tell, I'm absolutely in LOVE with this fic. The premise and your characterization is on point and I'm so excited to read more!
Prologue
I love that you started this out with the funeral. Not only that, but with 7 yo little Chase. I think it packs quite a punch that you had him dealing with his mother's death at such a young age. His uncle is so Good, staying with him like that. I feel so bad for Chase.
Can I just say that I love the fact that Chase is gay? It's so nice to see!
OH NEVERMIND, SCREW CHASE'S UNCLE! I hope Dean kicks his sorry ass when he comes into the picture. Or Chase does it himself. Either way, I hope he gets what's coming to him for sure.
Oooh, I'm wondering how he changed and if it's in a good or bad way. Does this mean he's going to get his revenge on Dwayne?
I feel so bad for Chase. What a horrible life to live. I hope he's able to find happiness sooner rather than later. And Dwayne. God, instead of helping his nephew he just throws him in the basement? God, what an ass!
"Why did you abandon me?"
Welp, that's it. I'm dead. That line right there has killed me.
Chapter One
Yeah, Chase, tell him! Get onto Dean for abandoning you and your mother! In all reality, though, I hope they're able to work things out and reconcile.
YOUR FATHER WAS FRAMED, BBY! IT WAS A SHAPESHIFTER! Sorry, I'm so into this story, so into it.
I love how Chase is willing to believe his father on the matter, even if he really doesn't. I hope he'll be convinced sooner rather than later. It was also really sweet of him to let Dean and Sam stay with him.
CHASE KILLED HIS UNCLE? Aw, hell yes! And good on his aunt for actually coming forward and telling the truth. It's true that Chase has had a rough life and something tells me it's going to get rocky all over again what with Sam and Dean in the picture.
If you can't tell, I'm absolutely in LOVE with this fic. The premise and your characterization is on point and I'm so excited to read more!