青い空 - Comments

The summary itself was super powerful, especially for the opening of a drabble. I like the minimalist look of the layout, too, it's nice on the eyes without being boring.

And honestly, the summary was only a set up to an absolutely beautiful drabble. I just loved the comparison of eyes being like skies and the imagery really brought this entire drabble to life. In the short piece you could really feel the emotion, could really connect with the unnamed characters. As someone said before me, I absolutely love stories about familial relationships because they're hard to find on the website and I feel like you've pinned it down so well in just a matter of a hundred words or so.

Even as infants, she knew she had to protect her. For they were twins, two of the same, - I feel like having a full stop between these broke the flow a little, a comma would have done. Perhaps maybe changing up the sentences in this area, but it could just be me

But overall, his truly was a really beautiful piece and I absolutely loved reading it. And I also just wanted to add that She would make sure her skies never rained again was absolutely beautiful and really completed the drabble perfectly. Excellent piece!

This is simply beautiful. Well done.

From the muted simple layout to the poetic writing, this is a full-package treat. I found this piece to be very soothing, almost like a lullaby. I feel like this character whoever they are, they see the world differently that most people do. It really feels like something that is so present in a singular moment that it doesn't matter the who, what, where... this work is very powerful and profound.
In just handful of words you were able to make me feel something extraordinary.

Just one question: any reason why you chose to give this a Japanese title? Just curious... I think it's a great touch personally.

Amazing job, you have my recommendation.

I love the short and powerful nature of your works. They make emotional drabbles. A collection of these would be amazing to read in a book.

Title says blue skies but why does it feel so gray? Again I love this, such a beautiful work of art you've made with only a few short sentences, I wanna be honest it feels like these would be more suited as poems than stories? Because they're so short other than that. I love this all so much. DO keep up the good work.

This was beautifully written and, even though it's so short, you tell a story that makes sense and is powerful. I personally really like stories about fraternal love because I feel like it's such an underrated topic in places like mibba because often, on fanfiction websites, people tend to focus on romantic love and forget about other relationships.
I love that you didn't need purple prose or ellaborate descriptions to write such a beautiful and meaningful piece, too.
What does the title mean, by the way?