The Brightness of Day - Comments

  • dawn of light

    dawn of light (100)

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    I'm in love. In love. Honestly everything about this is great. I love the dynamics between Izzie and Theo~ You write about them in this raw, natural way that makes me swoon. I really love that part in chapter three where they talk about being stuck-- that kinda stuck to me because it's real life shit, y'know? I'm again in love with the fact that everything from the first chapter to the most recent have these relatable and realistic scenes (McDonald's in the car, overthinking, deep talks in a car) and I just love everything about this. Also I need to know more about Milo and everything. IM DYING OVER HERE

    I also can't wait until the besties meet up! I'm excited because I'm always a sucker for a plot about friendship tehe

    PLS UPDATE SOON, RAV
    December 20th, 2017 at 09:37am
  • cruciatus.

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    I can very much relate to the beginning of this story as, ironically, I almost did this very same thing (setting out cross-country to my best friend) earlier this year. That said, perhaps I'm a bit biased but I think this is a really unique idea for a story and I really love your writing style. I can't wait to see where Izzy ends up, who Theo is to her, and where this story takes me!
    September 25th, 2017 at 02:16am