February 3rd, 2018 at 10:53am
he was her Daddy and Daddies don't leave.
After that line, the tears officially started rolling down my cheeks. This was so beautifully written. The details describing the setting played straight through my head perfectly. And you could really feel the raw emotion that you put into this.
WOW, okay, way to break a heart! As Ghoul Scouts pointed out, he was her Daddy and Daddies don't leave. this is the line that killed me. I actually got teary-eyed. While my father didn't pass away, he was never really in my life, so reading that packed such an emotional punch that I couldn't help but get teary-eyed.
AND THE LAST LINE! Girl, you know how to make someone emotional. This was such a beautiful piece and I'm so happy I got to read it. Well done!