Very interesting story! I agree with everything bvcky barnes said about your writing.
March 9th, 2019 at 04:30am
Bark at the Moon
I LOVE the way you started this with someone's time being up. You described the terror and everything else perfectly. I absolutely lived for this first chapter.
Out of Touch
I really like that Coralee became a hunter after her sister's death. She knew something wasn't right and she went with it. I hope by the end she'll figure out who, or rather what, it was that killed her sister.
I'm also really digging the fact that Bobby is basically a father figure to everyone. It warms my heart to see him in stories, especially as the cool father figure to people that don't have families.
I Drove All Night
Okay, the wraith is a dick. I'm really hoping either Coralee overpowers him or Sam and Dean come in to kick some wraith ass.
I love that it was Coralee who killed the wraith! I don't see that much in SPN stories, and when I do it's cheesy and not very realistic, but you managed to keep it realistic and do it in a way that I haven't seen before.
Also, you captured Dean's sense of humor to a T and I'm in love lmao.
Don't Go Near the Water
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. You're following the show smoothly with how things happen and you're hitting the nail on the head with the characterization of Sam and Dean. I'm loving this!
Burnin' for You
I'm seriously loving your description so much in this. It's perfect and your characterization is perfect. I love the way they solved the case and that it had gone without a hitch.
I'm so excited to see where you're headed with this and I can't wait until she finds out what happened to her sister! Well done!
Welshies in the house! 
