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  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I absolutely LOVE the friendship between Arthur and Merlin on the TV show and you've done an awesome job and capturing that!

    Just a couple of small things I noticed:

    You missed out the word 'the' in the second sentence starting with Both of.

    You missed out the 'r' in the word beard in the same sentence
    October 12th, 2017 at 10:52am
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