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  • delicate.

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    GIIIIIIRL I am so HERE for this! First of all, your summaries have improved so much! I'm so proud.

    I loveeeee this and can't wait for more! Kelly tho. drooling.
    October 17th, 2017 at 04:09am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I really like how you introduced both the characters, it gave me a glimpse of what was on their minds before they met and just gave a little insight into their lives.

    I also like the way you played it with the morning after, it wasn't just a jump straight into the relationship side of things, you kept it cool and added the nice touch of the note at the end.

    I can't wait to see where you take this :)
    October 17th, 2017 at 01:43am
  • amandarenee08

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    I really like this!
    October 17th, 2017 at 01:36am
  • amandarenee08

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    I really like this!
    October 17th, 2017 at 01:35am
  • The Color Abi

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    THIS LAYOUT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND THE SUMMARY IS INCREDIBLE OMG
    October 15th, 2017 at 04:25am
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