I think your emotive style of writing is really well executed in this. There's lots of honest emotion in it, and you really feel the pain of it. It's a situation so many people find themselves in and you put into words something that people often cannot. Your metaphors are really strong too, and I think they capture the mood and essence of the topic brilliantly.
This is such an honest and raw approach at writing a piece about heartache. It's a subject that can easily become cliche and overwritten, but you found a very masterful way to write it. I was totally enamored with the subtle touches you put into your story to make it more mature and polished. You really took me in to the life of the narrator and I found myself heartbroken for her when she found out about the cheating, especially when she was still putting so much effort into the relationship. This was brilliant, and I absolutely loved reading it. Thank you.
Thank you!