Your God, Own Martyr - Comments

I read this piece listening to the song you posted and it was just so fitting. I felt like it really added to the experience I mean, everything about it was just so… perfect. With the beat and pacing of the song, it really did feel like I was slowly trudging into the cathedral, to my hell. The part where you wrote “You touch the pews as you walk” made it feel so real - because people really do that.

Your imagery was just so beautifully dark and captivating. I was instantly drawn in. I liked how this was short, but also gripping. I absolutely love the way you write.

I absolutely adored this! I've probably read it about three or four times at this point, which probably sounds a bit weird, but I seriously can't get enough of it. It was all so poetic and descriptive, but also dark.

I think one thing I love about this, and I'm not sure if you did it on purpose or not, was I know, Angel. followed by Just like I know you’ve lost your wings.

I know you’ve fallen so far. It was so powerful to me that I read it over and over just completely in awe.

Another thing I absolutely adored was the way you took something like gluttony and applied something borderline lustful to it. I thought that was a beautiful twist to what I usually see gluttony to be.

I don't even have words to describe how beautiful this is. Pure poetry. Maybe even something more. I'm absolutely in love.