The detail and imagery in this is absolutely beautiful. The way you described the feeling that the character felt and endured was so amazing and just descriptive that I was absolutely captivated. I couldn't stop reading once I'd started.
I really feel like you captured the prompt you chose perfectly. Sitting back and wanting to dream, but forgetting why you were even there in the first place is definitely a curse and the way you wrote everything captured that so well. Hhhh, I'm so in love with everything about this.
Whoa this is written so beautifully. You open your mouth to scream, but your throat is coated in something that tastes like a mix of horror and sadness. The imagery is fantastic!!!
I really feel like you captured the prompt you chose perfectly. Sitting back and wanting to dream, but forgetting why you were even there in the first place is definitely a curse and the way you wrote everything captured that so well. Hhhh, I'm so in love with everything about this.